I'm getting closer to finishing the turnaround for my Hero character now. I still have a way to go, but it is more or less in the refinement stages now. I've been scribbling down notes as I go, deleting annotation as I change the character, and the bits that are left are the bits I've yet to alter. Of course, these are my own observations, and I'd appreciate it if I could get an outside perspective. So, once again, I am fishing for feedback!