tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7210299699467384784.post7541692923994297213..comments2023-07-01T08:50:52.116-07:00Comments on Steven Payne: Patchwork Pals- Version TwoSteven Paynehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08946722461895676727noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7210299699467384784.post-57918196417718884522012-02-03T16:25:11.609-08:002012-02-03T16:25:11.609-08:00Steve - it's too complex for sure. I want you...Steve - it's too complex for sure. I want you to step away from scripting, with all the detail etc. - and just go for the logline approach - just try and get to the bare bones of it. I think the whole idea that the first cat is exploded is too much; if he was taking delivery of (another) dead animal so he could complete his creation, that would make your story leaner already. Frankie's goal is to complete his patchwork monster - the obstacles are...?tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com